Read p. 4 & 5 in your TFK and state your feelings. You must use 2 pieces of evidence from the text to support your stand!!
Do you think technology can damage your eyes? Do you think you should participate in a Screen Free Week?
Read p. 4 & 5 in your TFK and state your feelings. You must use 2 pieces of evidence from the text to support your stand!!
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jayanth
5/11/2015 03:32:13 am
they can help you by damaging the eye problem because some machines tell you what is the problem and then you can take glasses
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Ms. Adams
5/11/2015 03:40:03 am
What makes you say that? What did it say in the article?
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jayanth
5/11/2015 03:44:51 am
it makes me say that the machines help you to solve the problems and the article tells me about people who can't see.
charlotte
5/11/2015 03:52:38 am
I agree with you about What makes you say that and What did it say in the article to Jayanth.
Claire
5/11/2015 03:41:48 am
Can you add more evidence to your claim?
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justine
5/11/2015 03:42:43 am
can you give 2 pieces of evidence, your'e feelings, and do you think you should participate in the screen free week?
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vishvaa
5/11/2015 03:45:23 am
can you add evidence
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jessie
5/11/2015 03:47:44 am
is it ok if you can add some more evidence?
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Justine
5/11/2015 03:37:42 am
Yes, I think that technology can damage you're eyes.
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Claire
5/11/2015 03:39:56 am
I agree Justine! I also think that technology can damage your eyes.
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ashmi
5/11/2015 03:41:41 am
also then the government will not have to spend more and more money on research and could spend it on other things like reapering places that are broken down like Detroit.
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seth
5/11/2015 03:43:59 am
yes claire if you play a lot you need 15 minute breaks in each 45 minutes
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Eddy
5/11/2015 03:44:08 am
Not all technology damages your eyes! What about heat? Cold air? Those are technology. You have to be good at math.
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Claire
5/11/2015 03:52:00 am
Well yes, not ALL technology is bad for your eyes but things like computers and iPads are bad for your eyes.
Ms. Adams
5/11/2015 03:46:05 am
Why do you think screen time might damage your eyes? I agree about taking a break every 45 minutes!
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Daniel
5/11/2015 03:54:15 am
Arnav, i agree. I was told by my mom that just relaxing and resting your eyes are good for them
arnav
5/11/2015 03:49:45 am
i agree that you said yes because the eyes are really important to your body
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Claire
5/11/2015 03:56:17 am
Arnav I agree that the eyes are important to your body!
Brigitte
5/11/2015 03:56:44 am
i agree you should not go on technology for a week
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cj
5/11/2015 03:38:13 am
i do think that is bad for your eyes so it could also give you a headche so is do agree
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Claire
5/11/2015 03:41:06 am
I also agree the screens are bad for your eyes.
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ashmi
5/11/2015 03:43:06 am
i agree but the article did not say to not go on electronics ever again it just said to stop for a little bit and we do not use them all the time at school we use them for like an hour
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vishvaa
5/11/2015 03:46:11 am
me to
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justine
5/11/2015 03:46:18 am
nice./
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Grace
5/11/2015 03:48:15 am
I agree with you CJ, you should get to go outside :)
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Claire
5/11/2015 03:56:58 am
yeah we should get outside!
charlotte
5/11/2015 03:49:51 am
Clarence I agree with you because if you stare at a screen then your eyes can be square.
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trevor
5/11/2015 03:55:03 am
also the only way to listen to music is going to the concert or just singing your self
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Vinati
5/11/2015 03:55:35 am
Yeah, you should just take a break when you are on an electronic for too long. You dont have to never use an electronic ever again.
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Claire
5/11/2015 03:38:19 am
I think technology is harmful to your eyes.
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cj
5/11/2015 03:45:56 am
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Grace
5/11/2015 03:54:28 am
I like your response because you put your own experirences inside your response!
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ashmi
5/11/2015 03:38:25 am
i think that we should participate in screen free week. I say this because a lot of people have myopia . Also i think that we should do this because then the government would not have to spend all that money on research and on other things better things for the count try. . some evidence from the article is last year the NEI spent ,million dollars on research. by 2020 one third of the population will have myopia
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seth
5/11/2015 03:40:03 am
yes because it dosent helps your eyes and you would want to take a fifteen minutes every fourty five minutes
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Claire
5/11/2015 03:43:44 am
I agree Seth!
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arnav
5/11/2015 03:52:46 am
i agree seth because i think people need a 45 min break
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5/11/2015 03:41:15 am
My feelings are that you should take a break from work more often.
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Ms. Adams
5/11/2015 03:47:16 am
Can you give me one more piece of evidence from the article?
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vishvaa
5/11/2015 03:48:07 am
i like that you wrote alot
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Eddy fbd
5/11/2015 03:51:53 am
Another thing is that screens too long can damage your eyes.When people have healthy vision, their eyes focus on the retina. When people have damaged eyes, their eyes focus on light in front of the retina.
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Claire
5/11/2015 03:53:34 am
Can you add a little more from the article?
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Grace
5/11/2015 03:42:19 am
Tug-Of-War 1: I think technology can damage your eyes because in the article, it said that studies are showing a rise in myphoia (aka nearsightness) The National Eye Institude showed that nearsightness among americans grew 66% from 1971-2004. Some experts say that by 2020, nearsightness could affect 1 third of the world's population. Scienctists link the rise of nearsightness to an increase in electronics, including cmputers and cell phones.
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Claire
5/11/2015 03:46:45 am
I agree Grace.
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jessie
5/11/2015 03:49:38 am
i agree to get some freash air
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Daniel
5/11/2015 03:59:23 am
Yes, my mom encoureges me to go out and play 30 minutes every day
vishvaa
5/11/2015 03:43:34 am
claim:i think it does because it makes light and light damages your eyes evidence:light is a hot energy so the heat hurts your eyes and also light is kind of blury so it can blur your vistion
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charlotte
5/11/2015 03:45:34 am
TUG-OF-WAR
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Jessie
5/11/2015 03:46:38 am
I think technology do damage your eyes. I don't think you should participate on screen free week, because if you always watch flat screen your eyes are always going to focus on one thing close to you then you might not see far things clear and close thing clear. To keep your eyes healthy you can always go outside and play some more so your eyes can focus on different things. You can also relax your eyes by closing them and looking at far distances, mostly you can do a 15 minute break. May 4-10 is a right time to go and watch some TV. Mostly you can watch TV or flat screen 45 minutes. If you can not see clear go to the eye doctor and get some glasses. Glasses can make things see more clear (like me.) ( sometimes take off your glasses and look at far distances 15 minutes or more.
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Claire
5/11/2015 03:48:39 am
Nice blog Jessie!
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jessie
5/11/2015 03:50:54 am
thanks
stephan
5/11/2015 03:52:29 am
nice
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siddharth
5/11/2015 03:49:30 am
eyes and glasses are inportent because the help people see proply and see good. Eyes are awesome keep them safe. eyes help see.
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Veda
5/11/2015 03:49:56 am
yes,because you might have a myopia or nearsighted.no,because
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Daniel
5/11/2015 03:50:40 am
I think yes because the eye focuses light on the retina which sends an image to the brain. sometimes though, we can damage our eyesight which can make us nearsighted or make far away things look blurry.
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Daniel
5/11/2015 03:52:22 am
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jessie
5/11/2015 03:53:47 am
what does the bottom mean?
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Daneil
5/11/2015 03:54:56 am
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Claire
5/11/2015 03:54:45 am
well this is our assignment so we should be doing this
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Daniel
5/11/2015 03:56:04 am
Still, my eyes are hurting already... seriously!!!!!
Vinati
5/11/2015 03:51:03 am
1. Yes, I think technology damages your eyes because when you are on any electronic your eyes wont come off of it because you are enjoying what you are doing. when you are on a device for too long that damages your eyes.
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stephan
5/11/2015 03:51:38 am
Yes I think that technology does hurt your eyes and you should take a TV (or any electronic devices). I say this because too much screen time can focus your retina to close to the screen and makes objects to close (blurry). this called myopia (MI-O-PI-A). The eye works like a
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Trevor
5/11/2015 03:52:15 am
yes it can heart your eyes and no i will not go 1 week without electronics. i want go a week without my ipad because i have to get my daily bonas and get my loot and text nolan. i think people get glasses cause they play on there ipad to much.
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Daniel
5/11/2015 03:57:15 am
Youa WANT to go a week without your Ipad???
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sasha
5/11/2015 03:55:17 am
I think it would strain your eyes because the light on your device is bright so if you put it close to your eyes you would be wearing glasses very soon.In the article it said that many kids in eagle school are wearing glasses.A girl named Azaria was having trouble looking at the board at school so she went to a eye doctor and they told her she had myopia.that is why it is important to not look at electronic things for such a long time or keep it towards you eyes.I would really want to participate in a screen free week.It would also help me focus on Mstep.At the end I would get a very good grade.
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kendall
5/11/2015 03:58:08 am
I think that teachnology can damage your eyes because in the aritcle the scientists say the rise in nearsightedness increases by computers and cell-phones use. And I think that you should get participate in a screen free week because if you go outside or play with your toys your eyes can get healthy.
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carly
5/11/2015 04:01:10 am
Tug a war!
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Preston
5/11/2015 04:01:38 am
I agree that technology can hurt your eyes because technology population has been raising sense 1971 to 2004.
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aditi sharma
5/11/2015 04:02:33 am
technolagy will harm your eyes beacause screens have alot of light and light harms your eyes alot so i agree that you should watch less tv and stay more healthy.and if you watch to much tv you will get somthing called glasses and you will deffinetly not like having glasses and glasses are bad for you so you better stay healthy and watch less tv
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